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Better Life The days are gone when life was simple
when hearts would grow instead of shrinking,
When eyes would see the world at ease
not being torn down to its knees.

There is no ending to the lies
which cause such pain and sorrowful cries,
Now evil is around every place
it sometimes flashes from face to face.

"What to do?" You start to wonder
somebody wake me from this slumber,
"But you are awake!" You hear yourself say
life shouldn't be turning out this way.

There is too much evil, where is the good?
things aren't going the way they should,
Things are becoming way too bad
does it not make you feel sad?

Two wrongs don't make a rBetter Life by ~thingi321
when i die When I die, don't look at me
And say he looks at peace,
For in my grave, I'll toss and turn
Until you come to me.

And don't you say, the same old thing,
he looks just like his Farther,
Cause I'll rise up and choke your neck
For insulting my poor farther.

Of course, it is, that I look pale,
I'm dead, you stupid fool
But after choking on that grape,
You'd think that I'd look blue.

Now run along and let me be;
Can't you see I'm trying to sleep
And by the way, this pillow's hard,
Why did you have to be so cheap?when i die by ~thingi321
Lord of the Rings country by ~thingi321
The Forgotten by ~thingi321
Alone

I look at you and reliz how much i love you
i cant stand to be apart
i look at your cot and see your not there
i feel the tear daddy is still here
i feel the fear i lost you now
no more daddy no more hugs
daddy is beatin and feels like a rug
a thought of you and im on the edge

and when your near everything is easy
i will fight this battle till the end
nothing will hurt you becoz i am here
i love you without any fear
i love how to laugh and smile
i love your cute little hand
i love waking up to you yanking on my eye

your just a baby but i love you so much
you cant understand how much this hurts
not knowing where you are
not knowing you are safe
not knowing who to turn to
not been able to tuck you in
i miss you my angel i miss u dear

Mummy wont take you away from me
ill fight till i die till i see you smile
your cought in the middle so young and incocent
but ill fight for you my angel ill fight to the death
daddy is here and he will never leave
daddy loves you no matter what
i love you
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just advice

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Ok im after Advice here...

Today apperantly my 2nd child was born to a ex.....Now there is no proof it is mine and evin if it is to be honest...i dont want it. I would like to have no kids as it stands.
Now as far as im concerned i want nothing to do with this child...id be happier not to have to ever see this child....
Now i just wanna know what you guys think?
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Mood: Sadness ~pixievamp Apr 9, 2007
Shame your leaving hunny:(
Hope you get more focused and come back soon, I'll miss you:(
Luv Pixie:hug:

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~datKatze Dec 20, 2006
He wie geht es Ihnen? das havnt, das dir um viel entschieden sollte mich gesehen wird, sagen hallo


lol

i'm sorry but i didn't understand anything. XD just the first sentence... and that u say hello... ^^

so... c ya XD

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Mood: Joy ~pixievamp Dec 19, 2006
Thanx for adding me to ur friends sexy!
Proud to do the same and get a damn avartar!
Love pixievamp
xxx

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~thingi321 Dec 20, 2006
haha its not a problem hun...im waiting to get a pic of you and choc sauce in black lacy underwear for my aviators hahahaha
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`ryano292 Dec 16, 2006
you make me wanna la la la la la la

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~thingi321 Dec 16, 2006
you make me wanna la la la la la la????
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`ryano292 Dec 17, 2006
It's a song

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~datKatze Dec 8, 2006
thank u for the comment "nette galerie" ^__^ im very happy about it...
so... c ya the next days

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Mood: Joy ~soulReaper15 Oct 19, 2006
hi my name is soulreaper15 and your poems are great,if your not doing any thing can please visit my gallery
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